It's about a young Korean American woman who is a violinist in an orchestra. She is an orphan and relies on her best friend, Delia, for support and friendship. She has a crush on the first chair violinist, Peter, but he turns out to be an arrogant asshole. But then Mary meets Peter's younger brother, Oliver, and they hit it off in a quiet, gentle way.
During her surgery, Mary has a vision of her grandmother. During this vision, her grandmother explains that in order for her to survive the surgery, she must promise to save someone. But how do I make this story not completely romantic while keep elements of magical realism and still captivating the reader?
I might send the story to a new/old friend, C, for her suggestions. More heads are better than one?
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